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Don't Know

                Don't Know
It's a long pain,flowing through my veins.
Cursing the pain ,sleeping in frosty rain. 
Creeping with suffering,lying in hell.
Hangover of bearing,thuds heart without gain.
Leans over nails,crucifix the soul.
Thunders cross eyes,fills it with sacrifice.
Regretting the move,empty feel goes in vain.
Crumble down with emotion',and words get fumble.
Leaving the limelight,showing the world dark-knight.
Crossing over fear,only aftermath in light.
Ruined remains of manor,bricks fell like remains.
Bruised with wounds,cry in pain. 
Shattered dreams,walked on fire bed. 
Boulevard opens up,with dried leaves fallen dead. 
Collapse with emotions,doping is the only way.
Spoiling the sanity,diluting the originality.
Living on fast track,oldies are left to be slow.
Impelling it more,it only shakes heart spares.
          You lie in pain 
          Beats you till death 
          Kill you till your 
          last breath.


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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:31:00 AM
    This is very beautifully sad/painful write my dear friend! Sometimes, we come to the point that tough times are really hard to bear. However, let's just keep hoping that tomorrow is another day. Congratulations for this outstanding write! I hope you're doing great my dear! thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem and again for your kind visit and inspiring comments. Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:44:00 AM
    You know what, I have a bit of a hangover this morning, and all the pain in this poem, is not making it any better, but I enjoyed your wonderful work, love Elizabeth

    Date: 9/23/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Elizabeth For such wonderful comment.....I am in bit of hangover from last few days ,thats teh effect of saurabh...........