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Dont Hate Me Because I'M Beautiful

Punch DruNk in syllable havoc.. Counting cutters and their woes of tragic.. I sense sorrow and sensual sound.. Babies bred by crack head hounds.. I long to feed them twisted verse before your treason bleeds their worth.. As an "Elitist" scum I crave to cum in the mouths without a Philosophical curse.. But I must wait in line stand behind the Crowd of cons.. A.K.A. "Prenatal Johns" that here by solemely swear royalty comes impaired prepared with sticky notes groupie votes and NO class "quotes" So before I close these tasteless prose I toast to those.. Pre Diss Posed...

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Justin Bordner

Date: 2/11/2013 2:30:00 PM

Reasoning without sanctified structure making sense from reason too new to vote - cheers Kimmy, on your virtue in the face of vulgar vainity - for me, there is a sense of an obscure philosophical discipline known as epistomology which challenges our understanding of reality through words/language - whatever - good art Kimmy - J.A.B. %

Rockman Pritts

Date: 2/9/2013 1:19:00 AM

Cut out the crap!! You have a talent. Forget all of the reviews that are written to get you to read the responders poems. This poem is trash because of the way it is written. But it is gold in it's content. Give some color and structure to your work so that when people read it they can smile. Or cry. Or think about what you are saying. I see a star hiding behind a cloud. Move that cloud and let that star shine. Let it shine. Rockman

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/23/2013 10:08:00 PM

Wow Kimmy! I am loving this! Your message, your style - straight foward yet mysterious - a unique blend indeed. Very beautiful!

George Zamalea

Date: 1/13/2013 7:43:00 PM

Hello Kimmy, I love it because the expression is Individually unique and remarkable composed. Keep on! Thank you for sharing it.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/13/2013 4:59:00 PM

Hi Kimmy....thanks for stopping by....your artistic use of conjugated verbs is free and rhythmic....also filled with a sense of restrained emotion...cool! jimbo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2013 6:55:00 PM

You have a very individual way of expressing yourself, I like your style.

Carma Sanderson

Date: 1/7/2013 9:54:00 PM

Wow!!! Love it.... Raw and profound great job Kimmy, welcome to the soup my dear... Love Carma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/5/2013 3:58:00 PM

Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/2/2013 4:06:00 PM

cleverly crafted indeed. I like... - JH

John Posey

Date: 12/27/2012 1:07:00 PM

Very cleverly crafted... I detect a hint of sensuality tastefully inserted and never elaborated on. Good Job.... Write more..... Jake

Timothy Jacks

Date: 12/27/2012 11:27:00 AM

Hey Kimmy welcome to the soup. It's a nice place. I mean they ain't kicked me out yet. Write whatevers on your mind. I like this poem. Please continue writing. I encourage it.

Richard Ferry

Date: 12/26/2012 11:49:00 PM

Like it Feeling you did not finish it

Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/26/2012 5:34:00 PM

Well as far as the type it is a form of rhyme poetry. I cannot rate it, nor should you desire my rating because I'm new to writing poetry myself. It is interesting, I will say that much.