Don'T Cry I Love You

Trying to fill the void,
makeup all destroyed,
standing in your pretty dress,
hair all crazy and a mess.

Flowers are everywhere,
go over and take a chair,
watch the people walking by,
no one notices as you cry.

All here for the same reason,
it's like the changing of the seasons,
don't worry about me I am fine,
maybe you need a glass of wine.

All the decorations oh so fancy,
being here was never chancy,
flowers, music, and the candles,
hope it wasn't too hard to handle.

I loved you til the end,
I held you close my dearest friend,
now it's time to put me in the ground,
you were my best treasure ever found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 7/1/2009 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful write Illyanna, sad - but written with strong feeling>>James
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:28:00 AM
AWWW...now am crying even more.....
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:38:00 PM
Very interesting the way you ended. It's show that someone was cherished until your dying day. The flow and rhyme make the poem flow. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/29/2009 3:20:00 PM
Aw how sad, I love you. You are such a wonderful person, love you. Love Dreary Leerie, and I would be most dreary if I ever lost you. We'll have to go out Thelma & Loise style......
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Date: 4/29/2009 2:40:00 PM
This is so sad, it brought tears to my eyes. Kat
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