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I'm so done with these problems
 I'm so                             done,
  done,                            done
   with the                    drama
    with all of the stereotypes,

I'm so done with these people
I'm so                          done,
done,                           done,
with                           the lies
with all of the people staring,

I'm so fricking done with the
All-consuming, hate-inducing

Misery! Depression! Screams!
  so               so              so
done           done           done
  so               so              so
done           done           done

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  1. Date: 3/3/2010 1:22:00 PM
    Emotionally packed shape... I hope that this is not your life...And just a topic. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 3:37:00 PM
    I feel the exact same way. I understand where your coming from. Great poem!! <3Emily

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 10:53:00 AM
    i think i feel exactly this way

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 9:33:00 AM
    Good shape poem James. But it's sad hope things go better soon.

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 6:45:00 PM
    amazing shape. i know how you feel, i just want people to disappear sometimes. ------Ell

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 4:28:00 PM
    Very nice shape poem...enjoyed...Marty