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Dominoes Falling

Dominoes Falling

I wake as the rain greets me on 
the face
To realize you wept until your 
bliss was drained
From edges of lips well licked 
Lies the deepest desires that 
Two broken souls to a Valley 
long forgotten

Scream now, my dear, for this 
we live for,
Each cut thrusting us towards 
divinity’s floors
As this rush has us walking on 
all fours,
And we realize that we are 
Broken and Flawed
Left with these sharp edges to 
only draw blood 

Our story ended before it took 
Its future never to see the light,
Wasting time on each other
For a fantasy called “forever”
As forever ends with no caution 


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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great win... This one seems to have some of the same emotional core as "Domino Vows," a poem found in my portfolio.... Great writing, Ronny......Jake

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:23:00 PM
    congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Hello Ronny, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Life is not perfect for sure..Great winning work..Congrats on your time of glory...Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:15:00 PM
    Some things once shattered never recover. WOW.. great last line :)