Doll

They are so much obedient that they stay in glass almirah or in any place in my home as I keep them for my happiness to make beautiful of my rooms few of them are bride and grooms I have not heard their voice any day no complain they raise in any way as they have no life indeed to have their bathe I swill them all from my hand sometimes fall but never say anything or scowl I see them in the silent night light’s reflection make them bright they are my close friends all right they have no pain no any plight they fill gap of my loneliness happy as they are of non life

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/23/2013 9:42:00 AM

dolls are silent, unless one pulls the chord, that which is a reason to speak, and in this poetry is heard...

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/23/2013 11:41:00 AM

My sweet friend, you always keep in jail and I have no way to fly out. Thanks for your comment. I am always inspired by you. Loved much always, bl

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/22/2013 10:03:00 AM

Hi Bl, Well stated poem - dolls provide the serene environment lacking in a noisy household. It's funny how sometimes you wish some people would keep quiet but the thought of them becoming lifeless is not a welcoming one. I guess dolls do really fill the void and cause no problems. Well penned.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/22/2013 11:57:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your nice visit and for nice comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2013 4:46:00 PM

Very heartfelt poem.....Dolls don't hurt, or act difficult, but...but, they cannot love either! Interesting twists and turns to this.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/22/2013 7:45:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind visit to my page and for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl