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Dogmatic Dichotomy

Thomas was a religious man; he went to church every day; Matthew was an atheist, taking his journey another way. Thomas prayed for the hungry; Mathew took them food to eat; Thomas lit candles for the crippled; Mathew helped massage their feet; Thomas put money in the offering; Mathew helped the poor find work; Thomas condemned the truly evil man; Mathew tried to help reform the jerk. Thomas memorized each bible verse; Mathew gave books to the book mobiles; Thomas read parables about multiplying fish; Mathew helped fix the homeless meals; Thomas conversed with his God each day; Mathew talked to strangers on the street; Thomas sang songs with the chorus group; Mathew sang the praises of folks he’d meet. Thomas was a religious man, living life as the church said he should; Mathew was an atheist, driven to do for his fellow man all that he could. Lesson to be learned: Being religious does not necessarily mean we are doing all the good we can; and, being non-religious is not necessarily synonymous with being evil.

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Date: 2/21/2014 12:37:00 AM
Very nice Joe. Easy to read, flowing and precise--gets the message across perfectly. I am reminded of he difference between "I tell the truth" and "I am honest." The first is what one does. The other is what one is.
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Joe Flach
Date: 2/21/2014 12:02:00 PM
Mark, thanks for the input. You must have searched my list of poems to find a title that appealed to you - I am honored. You might have noticed that I have many - so, I have dabbled in a few different techniques and have tried easy and complex. I am, pretty much, a simple man, so most of my poems reflect that. Thanks again for taking the time to sample and comment.
Date: 7/28/2013 7:48:00 AM
I want to comment, but it is all so complicated. Live and let live. love, Kathy
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Date: 7/28/2013 2:44:00 AM
I second all you have written, its not what you say,as in prayers,its what you do day by day to help others.....Seren
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Date: 7/27/2013 2:54:00 PM
Bravissima, Joe. Religous does not necessarily spell good or equate to godliness, for that matter. I'm with you on this score. Good one, my friend. Licia :-)
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