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Doesn't it sound better

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Doesn't it sound better

Doesn't 60 seconds sound better then 1 minute ?
Doesn't  84,400 seconds sound better then 24 hours?
Doesn't 360 days sound better then 1 year?
Doesn't my name sound so much better with your last name?
But most of all don't me and you look better together 
Then you and her?

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:26:00 PM
    tell me ,do we,lol,nice write

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 1:07:00 PM
    Akira your not my type thanks..David

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:22:00 PM
    Happiness in life is 2 be 2......well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise