Do You Ever

Do you ever sit and look up at the stars?
Wondering just what life might throw at you next?
Wondering how you ended up with so much pain, sorrow,regret?
Or how when you think everything is fine something happens 
And your world feels like it crumbling away?

Do you ever lay and day dream 
About how you can make your wrongs right?
Wondering how you could lie knowing it wasn't right
Wondering how you could cause so much pain to another
Even though it was you they trusted with there life?

Do you ever stop to think
That maybe you were put in this world to  make a difference?
But all you do is fight,
Kill 
Steal
Even if your not doing in physically
But emotionally

Do you ever stop and see
The pain you caused me
Or my tears I cry at night
My smiles not so bright?

Do you ever...
Will you ever...
Just stop and think about
What your doing to me.......?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/9/2009 4:53:00 PM
Breana thatpoem meant so much to me.Thank you for putting some of my feelings into words.
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Date: 12/31/2008 12:15:00 AM
I can really relate as I have been hurt so much in my life and I wondered too, those that have hurt me, but I found that they never cared, never admitted to any wrong, never apologized. but one day they will give account for what they did. I just tried to forgive em and move on, no matter how much it hurt, I had to leave it there. God bless you and keep you.
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:45:00 PM
This is such a sad piece, but it was a great write. I have asked the questions myself to those who have hurt me, I think they do, if they know just how much they have hurt you. Wonderful write, keep it up :) Blessings, ~Michaela~
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