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Do It For Me

Your fingers play a tune Only my body can dance to Your lips emit a craze Only my lips can answer to Your heart pulls the strings Only my heart can respond to Play the tune, so that my body can dance, Emit the craze, that my lips can answer, Pull the strings so my heart can respond… I don’t care how you do it, just do it for me...

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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2010 8:25:00 AM

There's a cute delight to this beautiful verse Wilma. It's warm, loving and sensuously so lovely >> James

Gareth James

Date: 8/15/2010 1:07:00 PM

Well thought out, Wilma. A pleasant read

De R

Date: 8/15/2010 5:48:00 AM

I got to admit it, this poem is great, Wilma! 'Your fingers play a tune/Only my body can dance to'. A passionate write. Emily

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/15/2010 5:32:00 AM

Wilma you always grab my inention, to my fav it goes!!! excellent write my dear..always Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2010 11:38:00 PM

Wilma, a short poem with a delightful message. I enjoyed your poem your title walks in to body language/ Enjoyed your your witty way of flirting with someone's heart,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:04:00 PM

Wow! Terrific interpretation of the tune, Wilma. When you are truly in love, only one person can "Do it" for you. How blessed you are to have a man who knows how to pull your strings so your "heart can respond." Very creative! (If this were an acrostic, it would be yo, yo, yo, pepi -- LOL) Peppy is a great way to describe this verse! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2010 2:02:00 PM

Luv that tune Wilma.. u have captured the essence of true luv and emotion here..my friend.. am airsick..haha.. so beautiful.. am souping to keep my mind off the altitude..luv.. happy weekend..

James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2010 12:19:00 PM

I so hear a lovely tune Wilma, beautiful verse >> James

Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/14/2010 12:06:00 PM

sweet tune to a savage soul

Daver Austin

Date: 8/14/2010 10:46:00 AM

Hey! This is a fine tune. Very imaginative. Dave