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Dizzy

Chills interrupt me Course of thought changes Don't understand what I see As the whole world rearranges I squint to get a clear look in Which transforms with every blink Like a seconds glance is risky sin As sight moves from scene to scene Moments move and muses disappear My expectations are erased I question if I'm at fault here But I sense it's just misplaced September 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 7:44:00 AM
wow, what a deep write. I can't help but tie this into how crazy life can get at times, and how easy it is to be spun around, and become confused. I enjoyed this piece very much! keep writing! :)
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Date: 9/8/2010 10:27:00 PM
You couldn't have described dizzy in a better way.
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Date: 9/3/2010 11:52:00 PM
Another awesome write my friend.....Larry
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