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the blue sky matches the soft blue of the ocean skyline broken by bluish grey mountains between ... some still bearing white capped tips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2012 12:25:00 AM
Except we have no ocean, this could be describing many days here in my town!
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:03:00 PM
I live at near sea level, so I don't get to see the sky and water separated by mountains. This is another good tanka.
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