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Distance Is the River She Could Not Cross

The very essence of reality Pricked the man's four chambered pump Today he became a dumbfounded child Taken aback by the simple reply He was brought back to the ground From the fanciful flight of his own little dream She said"Distance is the river I cannot cross" These simple words drowned the pictured life His whole self was shaken to the core That river lost him all Trying to recuperate And Introspecting the things he said and heard today He now asks" Why can't my dream be my reality?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2012 4:37:00 PM
I love the way you wrote this bidyut,,,
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Date: 1/12/2011 7:29:00 AM
thanks deborrah
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Date: 1/12/2011 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful write..I would stop at "The river lost him all." The last 3 lines are obvious. I am having a contest to HIGHLIGHT poets from outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, please add your talent to the writes. Place your best poem & on the bottom put the country where you now live. Thank you! Light & Love
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:19:00 AM
very interesting write,,enjoyed reading,..p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2010 12:20:00 PM
Veyr profound and thought provoking write yiou have penned, bidyut
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