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Dismantled Spirit

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Dismantled Spirit

Dedicated to human realm.....

when it began...
menace of life made me die in each breath i took,
betrayed by the command of nature, in each phase my head shook...

shattered achievements..

confounded the mundane for whimsical supremacy,
likely to be fascinated towards the obscure prophecy..

tyrannical truths unfolds,

shadows of ego enlightened in my undesired destiny,
life being invaded by all omnipotent agony...
 soul in conflict....

 rather would i adrift to a breathless birth,
for the glimpse of perfection would pertain my worth.....

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:17:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Congratulations JAANAM:-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA