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Below is the poem entitled Disguise which was written by poet Mohammad Yamin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Breeze, shade and sun
Bride of weathers
How many disguise

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  1. Date: 9/27/2009 4:45:00 PM
    nice personification! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 8:06:00 PM
    Beautiful =) good job - eddie

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:45:00 AM
    Another existential question ... and man's lips must stammer before it.

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 10:48:00 AM
    One to ponder and reread again and again! Has a melancholy feel ... Thanks for all your welcome comments on my writing, Mohammad.

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 6:03:00 PM
    Beautiful, inexhaustable visions here, M. Thank you for your comment on my latest haiku - you my friend, hit it sopt on - exactly the meaning behind the words. :) I love that. blessings, Kristin

  1. Date: 11/3/2008 1:37:00 AM
    Very pretty Haiku, Mohammad! Love and blessings! Dorian

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 8:01:00 PM
    They are all in it together. There are times when they even fool the weather man and make him look like a jerk not knowing his head from a hole in the ground. I like the logic behind this piece. I can see the images. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 11:54:00 AM
    Much said in just three lines. I've already read your haiku four times. I like the way you end with a question. Nice use of alliteration. You really made my day with your kind thoughts on my poem. Thank you for the encouragment. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 5:07:00 PM
    Interesting haiku. Love the second line. All together great! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 4:32:00 PM
    That's a great Haiku Mohd...Thank you for sharing and commenting...:) Always, Farah

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 7:07:00 PM
    I love it the play on the words, flow so efforlessly, great take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 6:09:00 PM
    Mohammad such a nicely done Haiku well thought out! Laura :)