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Disguise

Breeze, shade and sun
Bride of weathers
How many disguise

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2009 4:45:00 PM

nice personification! Light & Love

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/25/2009 8:06:00 PM

Beautiful =) good job - eddie

David Smalling

Date: 4/19/2009 11:45:00 AM

Another existential question ... and man's lips must stammer before it.

Sue Mason

Date: 11/24/2008 10:48:00 AM

One to ponder and reread again and again! Has a melancholy feel ... Thanks for all your welcome comments on my writing, Mohammad.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/6/2008 6:03:00 PM

Beautiful, inexhaustable visions here, M. Thank you for your comment on my latest haiku - you my friend, hit it sopt on - exactly the meaning behind the words. :) I love that. blessings, Kristin

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/3/2008 1:37:00 AM

Very pretty Haiku, Mohammad! Love and blessings! Dorian

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/2/2008 8:01:00 PM

They are all in it together. There are times when they even fool the weather man and make him look like a jerk not knowing his head from a hole in the ground. I like the logic behind this piece. I can see the images. Great job! ~Joseph

Date: 10/31/2008 11:54:00 AM

Much said in just three lines. I've already read your haiku four times. I like the way you end with a question. Nice use of alliteration. You really made my day with your kind thoughts on my poem. Thank you for the encouragment. Keep on writing! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/30/2008 5:07:00 PM

Interesting haiku. Love the second line. All together great! Love, Shar

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/30/2008 4:32:00 PM

That's a great Haiku Mohd...Thank you for sharing and commenting...:) Always, Farah

Deneen White

Date: 10/29/2008 7:07:00 PM

I love it the play on the words, flow so efforlessly, great take care D-nyce