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Below is the poem entitled disemVOWeled which was written by poet Luke Irwin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Heaving salty neck,
Pulse, raging like a river,
He will be home soon.

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Luke. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:35:00 PM
    Luck, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

    Irwin Avatar Luke Irwin
    Date: 11/28/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:47:00 AM
    I think I would be absent. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:34:00 AM
    I read beneath here that this was about a cheating spouse. That makes it much easier for me to understand and appreciate the description. congrats on your win, Luke.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win Luke, hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Luck, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

    Irwin Avatar Luke Irwin
    Date: 11/23/2012 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Thanks Richard! Actually It's about a cheating spouse, hence the "VOW" in caps.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:03:00 AM
    Puppet?? I just thought you were a scary looking dude! Just kidding, very moving poem. Are you referring to a soldier?

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:29:00 PM
    This gave me a lot of chilling images. Amazing haiku--greatly enjoyed Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Oie yoie, this sounds scary enough, Luke.:( I had found that puppet head creepy, but this verse tops it off. Keep well, Mikki

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Ok you have said well. Very enjoyed. Michael