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Dirty Birdies

They might be dirty birdies… but of course I love them so. Even with the birdseed scatters far across the floor. But I doubt they’re really dirty since they crowd my birdbath so. And with the drought outside my door I let their water flow. They flutter around the bowl with ease as it empties twice a day. And I enjoy watching them play in a wonderful display. Nowhere will you find such an intensely flowing water storm. And 12 stick close together as they show they’re many charms. I authorize their playfulness for my many tiny friends. Even a tiny hummingbird comes to my window in the end. Now that is most surprising, as I have nothing for him to eat. We both just like admiring the view for it is such a treat. Of course he’s really telling me to turn on the sprinkler hose. For he loves to travel back and forth as the water travels so. As a child my mother took care of the chicken coup and began to Despise those Dirty Birds… but when I was young her comment turned Into a name for those I loved… I was too young to realize her true meaning At the time… Later it stayed with me as a memory of how different were our lives and how things are passed along from one generation to another...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/15/2012 11:02:00 AM
Your poems just blow me away, my dear Carol! Such tender and caring thoughts you express in your writings! Love every one I read! Have a great weekend, dear friend! Hugs, Jack
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Date: 8/19/2012 9:00:00 AM
I love the imagery this inspires!
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I too feed and water the birds..It is wonderful to see the different species that come to eat and drink..Thanks for the stop by my blog..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:41:00 PM
An intriguing title, and an interesting story told well.
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:46:00 AM
I feed the ones inside ( I have 8) and out. I love birds and their joyful sounds... my daughter on the other hand can't stand them. loved your poem this morning
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