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“Yesterday” We could write each other a “Worldly script” From the heart, “Today” We have our fears When pondering “Where to tomorrow” Our “Two worlds colliding” As the “Thread” Of our lives bares its soul In “Thoughts of you”. We ask each other Is this “The way it use to be?” When trying to dwell in “Memories” Oh so insecure. “Love is” We still believe Never will it be just “A long distant dream.” So we live on in “Hope” Cling to a time “From there to here” Revel with the “Ghost of an achievement” Till it is time for us to be “At the final goodbye”. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/29/2013 7:04:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment. I enjoyed giving this one another read. Great job!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/28/2013 9:50:00 PM

Sorry for returning so late as the internet problem is still not fully over. A beautiful Poem with the colors of love and its memories, which are always so intense and deep that it stays even if we want to go away from it. Thank you for liking my Independence Day Poem Harry. Love and best wishes ..Ravindra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2013 3:08:00 PM

Very well done for this challenge, Harry. You made one with a serious reflective theme because that is the type of them you do BEST!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/26/2013 2:57:00 PM

A fate that awaits us all... should we live so long... both alternatives are sad... Very nice work, Harry... Terry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2013 11:31:00 AM

how poignant in its mood and so swell done, harry.. you set the pace with such beautiful sentiments.. lovely!..:) huggs

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/26/2013 7:07:00 AM

Clever use of quotation to give this poem a unique flavor-- great write.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/26/2013 6:41:00 AM

Fantastic use of the titles that intertwine together so well. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2013 6:27:00 AM

- Unique, Harry .... beautiful! - Love it .... from top to bottom! - <3 -oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2013 7:16:00 AM

It goes to show you that each title is a poem within it self. Great titles excellent poem.

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/24/2013 8:10:00 PM

The way how thought changes from field to field in life when heart is concerned, you have clearly depicted a colorful picture with a very deep imagination. The journey of thoughts in the name of diminishing minds is suited nicely. Loved always my sweet friend, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2013 5:50:00 PM

Creative Title work that reads like winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Thanks for the visit to my work...Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 8/24/2013 10:10:00 AM

Nicely put together and nice message also Harry...good luck if for the title contest....:-)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/24/2013 9:13:00 AM

Due to internet problem I will return soon with my comments Harry Ravindra

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/24/2013 8:01:00 AM

Harry, so nice to read this. Good luck in contest! :) I see TIME means a great deal to you and LOVE...which is TIMELESS!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/24/2013 7:21:00 AM

Beautiful. And you are right, 'love is' even when all other memories are gone. I once cared for a woman who couldn't remember her husband's name or her marriage, but she absolutely knew she loved him and had 'forever' so she said, she just couldn't remember why.