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There was muck at your doormat.Would you call the Nemesis to clear the mess ? * You have given me the last pair of shoes. I will walk in them to the house of death. * This day, I had kissed you O moon, under the reeds. Till now the music is alive. Satish Verma

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Date: 11/24/2014 7:29:00 AM
The first stanza -- arrogance before the gods, No. Second stanza -- a sacrificial gift and a true response, third is awesome -- dance with all your might! loved the dimensions.
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