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Difficult

It's difficult, waking in the morning Staring at the ceiling, yawning Having bad feeling, it really hurts Nobody seems to understand your problems It's like a cut

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:30:00 AM

Deep little write...enjoyed

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 8/10/2014 5:20:00 PM

A very fine poem my boy. I'm proud of U.

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/10/2012 12:14:00 AM

Ah, such a deepy sad feeling you express here...Start your day with a prayer for waking then place your small hand in God's big hand...Not always over night, but prayers are answered...Stay strong! Cynthia

Innocent Raphael
Date: 9/10/2012 5:08:00 AM

thanks Cynthia. You are appreciated

Karen Croft

Date: 9/8/2012 7:38:00 PM

a cut so deep that no one else understands nor do they care to investigate why. good start on a good song!!!!!

Innocent Raphael
Date: 9/11/2012 8:30:00 AM

thank you Karen. Thank you