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Died Under Heaven's Grace

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Died Under Heaven's Grace

Dark alleyway filled with crazy games.
How many days has it been since I started this revolution?
This right here is why I ran away from home- to be free from all these restraining 
No one to tell me what to do!
I finally have control,
not my mom, not my dad, not anyone!
Yet love yanks me from the top as if I were a fish caught on a hook.

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  1. Date: 5/5/2011 7:34:00 AM
    wow. this is deep.

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 6:12:00 AM
    What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning John. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol