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Did You get what You want

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Did You get what You want

So it actually happens
I can’t believe it
Why do you make us wait so long?
What is the purpose, God?
Is that supposed to teach us anything?
I don’t know God
I don’t think I learned anything
Except that it does work on my patience
Is that what it is supposed to teach us?
Whatever it is, I don’t think we should have to wait
But you know best
You know what needs to be done first
I don’t
So there God
I am glad it is finally over
It just seemed I climbed the same mountain over and over
You wore me out God
Did you accomplish what you set out to do?

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:49:00 PM
    - New challenges every day Toquyen ... really nice poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 10/31/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne-Lise! I'll read it now. Love ya, Toquyen