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Devoid of Sustenance

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Devoid of Sustenance

This night of misery my essence rapidly descending
Tears like summer rain cascading
O for this dark wintry night prolong
Breaking heart aches so forlorn

Circumstance, distance always impeding 
In silence apprehensive heart conceding 
Devoid of sustenance waiting in anguish
Quiescent alone in sorrow I languish

As posts interweave deferring
Father Time nonchalant delaying
Yet, essence nourish essence elating
Unadulterated love relaying 

Tonight, on borrowed wings my heart must fly
To sheltering warm arms in which I'll lie

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  1. Date: 3/6/2010 7:59:00 PM
    Congratulations Audry, on your success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 2:35:00 PM
    Congratulations Audrey, on your honorable mention in the “Tending The Sprouts” contest sponsored by: Catie Lindsey with this heartfelt poem. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 6:23:00 PM
    Thanks to you Catie for the honor in selecting my poem as one of the winners in your "Sprouts" Contest! An honor I will always cherish. Thanks to all my PS family for reading and leaving all these kind encouraging comments! Love to you all, Audrey

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 4:08:00 PM
    What a beauty this is Audrey!! A lovely sonnet, and a well deserved win! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 2:28:00 PM
    Congrats Audrey on your winning poem in the Sprouts contest.. an amazing write for an amazing win.. enjoy your victory friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. and thankxxx so much for your special comments always..

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 1:21:00 PM
    A beautiful sonnet, Audrey! Congratulations on your success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 12:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest with this poem Audrey. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 3:45:00 PM
    Love the title here and the use of it within the write as an expression of a lonely heart ... another wonderful write!! Sorry I don't get around often to comment ... you are an excellent writer and I've missed out on a lot!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 9:15:00 AM
    Nice words, yay, its got ummphh is this about revenge sex?

  1. Date: 1/27/2010 9:11:00 AM
    It surely is nice to have those heart-wings to fly you to safety. This sonnet is delightful. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 10:31:00 PM
    Yes, it is very eloquent, as some of the others said below. Lots of beautiful words in this sonnet.Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 10:03:00 PM
    this write speaks of familiar emotions to me but in an eloquent fashion that I can only wish I had. Excellent

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 6:41:00 PM
    truly both full of sadness and devotion along with love I too hope you entered this into the contest,in my opinion definitely a winner,this for sure is going to my favorites,,,since I have lived these words within my life,,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 3:22:00 PM
    You should have been born during the British Romantic Period, Audrey, because this poem matches well with the love poem of Keats, Shelley and Byron. Terrific writing to express a deep sense of sadness. The last two lines are magnificent! Love, carolyn (and you called me Doris in a recent comment, but I surely know how easily that mistake can be made)

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 8:08:00 PM
    beautiful meloncholy!

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 5:03:00 PM
    Like the last two lines especially. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 3:57:00 PM
    thank you for everything.

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 3:08:00 PM
    Very nice and beautiful, love the hope in the ending

  1. Date: 1/22/2010 10:25:00 PM
    A sonnet of such yearning, Audrey. I love the ending. Lainie

  1. Date: 1/22/2010 7:51:00 PM
    Well this is quite beautiful.. I hope u entered it in the I Love U Because... contest.. such beautiful words Audrey.. so enjoy your writes.. luv.. Linda-Marie..