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Despair

Im drowning in my own remourse my life changed it went completely off course shattered dreams of empty times its dragging me so far down I feel blind. The sun has gone my light is grey im just hoping my sun will return and lighten these tormenting days. Im normally strong and brave I gave, I gave, I gave my light is shade im not strong and brave my light is gone someone please rescue me and rebuild my soul strong and brave.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2009 4:25:00 AM

We have all felt this way at sometimes or other in our lives. You have expressed the topic very well. There is a higher power that can strengthen you in these times. Keep writing. Sara

Janetta Harrington

Date: 10/18/2009 6:58:00 AM

the course may be long, and it may hurt, but you will come thru because you are much stronger than you think....how i know?... you can voice your feelings and you can ask for support. janetta.

Veronica Joseph

Date: 6/12/2009 8:58:00 AM

Inside you will find your rescue. Get the book Broken Open by Elizabeth Lesser.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/12/2009 6:31:00 AM

it's so hard to stay positive...my feelings have been echoping yours this week and I think you are right to ask for help. HUGS Light & Love

Daver Austin

Date: 6/11/2009 3:33:00 PM

Good to meet you you, Gareth. I wish I could rescue you, but the Buddha says not to take on another's karma. Friend, I have enough of my own to account for. Keep writing. You may just rescue yourself. Love, daver