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Desire

The snow is settling softly, there's a log upon the fire, the night is all around us and we're shaking with desire. The room is spinning slowly, there's a candle on the shelf, it flickers o'er your body and I can't control myself. Hunger overcomes us as we play the lovers' role, grasping, clutching, screaming 'til we reach the lovers' goal. Spent, exhausted, then we lie locked in each others arms, I gaze into your soft brown eyes, so grateful for your charms!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 2:25:00 PM
wOOOOw, very romantic experience. TY for all your comments my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:29:00 AM
Nice, I hope you experienced this. What a wonderful feeling!
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:54:00 PM
Wow! What a transition from the humor of Mollie's lolly to the romance and passion in this remarkable write! A man of many talents! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2009 12:11:00 AM
wonderful -i love the second stanza-candle on the shelf,it flickers o'er your body,and can't control yourself,and i reread it,infact i like it all and its going to my favs,-this is the best i liked of yours,though they're all wonderfully penned-----charma
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Date: 4/22/2009 11:53:00 PM
So romantic and filled with passion. Great writing. Wonderful imagery! Smiles from Lolita
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