Desire

The snow is settling softly,
there's a log upon the fire,
the night is all around us 
and we're shaking with desire.

The room is spinning slowly,
there's a candle on the shelf,
it flickers o'er your body
and I can't control myself.

Hunger overcomes us
as we play the lovers' role,
grasping, clutching, screaming
'til we reach the lovers' goal.

Spent, exhausted, then we lie
locked in each others arms,
I gaze into your soft brown eyes,
so grateful for your charms!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/27/2009 2:25:00 PM
wOOOOw, very romantic experience. TY for all your comments my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:29:00 AM
Nice, I hope you experienced this. What a wonderful feeling!
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:54:00 PM
Wow! What a transition from the humor of Mollie's lolly to the romance and passion in this remarkable write! A man of many talents! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2009 12:11:00 AM
wonderful -i love the second stanza-candle on the shelf,it flickers o'er your body,and can't control yourself,and i reread it,infact i like it all and its going to my favs,-this is the best i liked of yours,though they're all wonderfully penned-----charma
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Date: 4/22/2009 11:53:00 PM
So romantic and filled with passion. Great writing. Wonderful imagery! Smiles from Lolita
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