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DEPRESSION

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DEPRESSION

DEPRESSION

gray sky full of twigs
a late november ugly
no snow    and    no snow


a gray sky so low
staring up – eyes wide open
no snow    and    no snow






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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Good morning, Daver.. this one deep Haiku.. Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 2:56:00 PM
    lovely write here, Daver - no snow here either

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Daver - I am sorry for your lack of snow but love the twigs in the gray sky. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:10:00 AM
    daver, i must tell you this piece intrgues me as the sullen mood you expressed is beautiful....love the repetition effect.. are you alright or just part of the poetic process?..huggs..:)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 1:15:00 AM
    Wow Daver, I see you got really inspired..or is it un-inspired?? L O L..' 'however' should we recieve any white stuff, I shall despatch it off to Texas, with a strict no returns clause..! Hope fhat cheers you up..? Joe.

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 4:06:00 PM
    I love this pair of haiku you wrote, Daver Would the snow actually make you happier?.