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Depression

crippled in the grief as all i've ever known the oppressive shackles drag behind each dreaded shuffle years have stretched and still i weep here in the shadows' watching those i love smile out of reach from my stretched rope i am dragged back to this room to hang my head in misery that i can not understand how joy can come so easy when all we are is alone this depression is familiar like a cloak weighed in lead i sit and ponder its existence

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Date: 3/3/2013 7:32:00 AM
You wrote what most poets are feeling at times.. we search deep within and then write.. if not we go crazy... Your comments on so much of my work last night was so amazing to wake up to... Love when my words can connect with another.. xxx Michael
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Tara Jennings
Date: 3/3/2013 4:24:00 PM
thanx, I do love your writing though. I don't get on much but when I do I always try to read your latest post.
Date: 3/3/2013 6:13:00 AM
Tara the shackles of daily life can become so heavy that we just crawl inside of ourselves and retreat to the comfort and safety of our own little corner watching from the inside out, as long as you can still write like this there is a piece of you still fighting the fight, have faith the opening gets bigger with time...David
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:50:00 AM
Oh My god excellent work my friend. can you read my poem.
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Book: Shattered Sighs