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Dementia In Add Minor

Give me some methylphenidate So I can concentrate Electrical impulses and chemicals mixed into one All of that is called memories for some Random people without faces Roaming around in my mind Leaving their muddy foot print traces Like souvenirs behind This dementia is a blessing So people shouldn’t be stressing For my train of thought Can’t be caught For rational irrationality Is no longer part of me

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2016 8:19:00 PM

PIETER, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2012 12:09:00 PM

A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Pieter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/26/2012

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2012 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Pieter. Love, Carol

Pieter Du Toit

Date: 7/25/2012 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback, appreciated. :)

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:30:00 AM

Pieter super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 8:32:00 AM

hmm I would say irattionality is the only solid remaining part of a demented person? I too have thought fondly on ocassions of the relief of forgetting BUT frgetting how to find HOME or a loved ones face is unbearable. Congrad's on your poetic success. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2012 7:08:00 AM

congrats on a great write and win for this extraordinary entry luv..

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 7/23/2012 4:16:00 AM

Interesting write on a hush-hush subject Pieter. Dementia is a facet of life that cannot be wished away. Love the phrase 'rational irrationality', Nice!