Deliverance

In wait of deliverance, life lingers ahead
Oblivious of what might lay instead
Impaled, in pain, in agonizing strain
Bereft of peace, life persists to drain

With desires unquenched, a life yet to be cherished
On the threshold of sanity, only nearly but perished
No want to live, no desire to die
The matter at hand was just to get by

Striving, as I must, to get through this moment
A savage ordeal of relentless torment
En route to oblivion, my eyes behold
The aura, valor, unseen, untold

To grant me salvation, my savior has come
The daunting magnificence, seen paralleled by none
A relief, to me, is the sight of my death
For conclusion to misery has finally cometh

With the shore of life now drifting away
To you, dear one, I have this to say
I do not ask you to mark my grave
To be remembered, my friend, is all that I crave

By M. Hussain Effendi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/24/2011 9:19:00 AM
Couldn't find one of your poems I haven't read, so, I picked one of my favorites. wishing you a very warm and wonderful season, whatever your faith. Love, daver
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Date: 12/10/2011 2:08:00 PM
A feeling of desperation that finally comes to peace. I was with you all the way.
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Date: 12/3/2011 9:01:00 AM
Awesome, I clicked on this poem... the title did not seem familiar to me... lol.. good now you have a poem, i have not read.. and if you have more..i will find them in time... about your poem: Deliverance is a drift away... Love the way you rhyme your poem.. and the concept of salvation is at hand.. enjoyed stopping by,..p.d.
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Date: 10/31/2011 3:13:00 PM
Well said, Mr. Effendi. To be remembered - how can one ask for more? Love, daver
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:47:00 PM
The rhythm in this is fantastic you know. How can you be so sad in such a great way? Hope we see more one of these days my dear but I'm never far away!
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Date: 10/10/2011 11:03:00 AM
Needed to visit as always, never tire of your mind, it always has someething important to say dear friend. How are you?
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:08:00 AM
We all desire to be remembered by those we love. Good memories of the good times in life..Enjoyed reading your very special work..Your presence at my work was very encouraging..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:10:00 AM
That is by far my favorite poem I have read in a long time. To put it simply, it is beautiful. Thank you for your contribution to the fact that death does not have to be feared.
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Date: 9/12/2011 10:28:00 AM
I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry M Hussain. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 8:44:00 AM
Had to come back to read again as the story is riveting and your use of words brilliant. So fine dear friend, waiting patiently for more!
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:39:00 AM
Great poem....and beautiful......very well done M. i luv it.....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:22:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today M. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:25:00 AM
Your meter and rhyme are perfect and the story is fascinating. You have created a masterpiece my friend.
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