Delicate

A delicate pink touches solemn gray
Looks silver as a winter's day
Only the warm moist air separates
As the sun slowly shows his face

All is quiet in this laid back neighborhood
Solitude and respect is understood
A lone raven lands on the roof next door
They're no different here at the shore

A lone small shrimp boat in line with my view
How odd it looks like a floating tee pee too
Where river meets the ocean wide
Going out to fish with the waning tide

Whispy angel wing clouds to the south
Illuminated by the sun's clought
Slowly the day begins to heat up~change
Soon 'twill be in a miserable range  

Written Wednesday June 05, 2013
At Tybee Island
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/13/2013 11:39:00 AM
This conjures a beautiful image Sara xx
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Date: 6/13/2013 10:00:00 AM
This is a beautiful scene you paint here my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a powerful image you paint for us to see, thank you for sharing this grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:24:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this poem Sara.Enjoyed th e read.
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