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Defined Not

Even if you posses the most brilliant mind I know of one thing you can never define. Study the world of fiction and facts study it all till your brain cracks. I'm sure, you shall never find the meaning for it's only told in a special feeling. A feeling that paints a smile upon your heart and does not fade like a piece of art. For it's not something you can define it's too wonderful and so rare to find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 4:40:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I like the optistism. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful week. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:15:00 AM
So true Maryam.Like that penultimate stanza very much.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/18/2009 2:54:00 PM
I life the flow and the beauty of the powm, great job.
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Date: 4/17/2009 5:05:00 PM
You make a most important point with poetic beauty, on what really matters in life. Of course I am all for the importance of education, but I hear you loud and clear and certainly agree. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/17/2009 4:11:00 PM
How right you are, Maryam! "Feelings" cannot be defined by studying "fiction and facts." Feelings come from our hearts, not from textbooks. Brilliant observation in a beautifully written poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:44:00 PM
Amazing, great job Maryam...Raul
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:35:00 PM
beautiful!
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:14:00 PM
Aww! Such a good love poem i expecially like the smile on you heart part, thanks for all the comments! ~Jen~
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