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Deer

There was a deer that was impressed by his horns But not with its legs which were thin as thorns Every day when it passed by the brook It looked at its leg and gave it a bad look When it was looking at its leg which was thin It saw a hunter coming from an inn It ran as fast as it could And stood by a piece of wood Its horns got tangled in a bush of thorns And could not untangle its horns The deer learnt that His legs had saved him,but not its horns as they were fat Everything that is good is a gift from God So why not accept it with a polite nod Benedict (8 years)

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Date: 5/9/2012 8:43:00 AM
Benedict well said..David
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:14:00 AM
Wow Benedict what a good rhyme here you did , well done xx
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