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Below is the poem entitled Deer which was written by poet BENEDICT JOHN. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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 There was a deer that was impressed by his horns 

 But not with its legs which were thin as thorns 

 Every day when it passed by the brook 

 It looked at its leg and gave it a bad look 

When it was looking at its leg which was thin 
It saw a hunter coming from an inn 
 It ran as fast as it could 
And stood by a piece of wood 

Its horns got tangled in a bush of thorns 
And could not untangle its horns 

The deer learnt that 
His legs had saved him,but not its horns as they were fat 

Everything that is good is a gift from God 
So why not accept it with a polite nod  

Benedict (8 years)

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Benedict well said..David

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Wow Benedict what a good rhyme here you did , well done xx