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Deep Sea Fantasy

Deep azure and aquamarine.
Torrents of creatures cascade by.
I absorb this peaceful scene.
A wonderland in my mind's eye.

Floating along this fantasy.
I swim with the fishes here.
Weightless and so wildly free.
Forgetting all my earth-bound fear.

Symmetry that serves me well.
Dancing on the sandy floor.
Then rising to the frothy swell.
Diving to retreat once more.

Seagrass feeds my appetite.
Lobsters,clams and mussels too.
I feast upon both day and night.
Then drift away when I am through.

So roll me with the ocean tide.
Let the waves just take me under.
Like a dolphin I'll joy-ride.
Through the depths of deep sea thunder.

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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 6:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 6:14:00 PM
    It really is a fantasy write. Fantastical!! And congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 2:53:00 AM
    Rolling in the ocean tide ,yes please, congratulations xx

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 1:24:00 AM
    congrats Deb on a wonderful write and well deserved win with this rare beauty luv.. happy easter blessings too..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 3:53:00 PM
    Loved the feel of being underwater in this, beautiful imagery..excellent on this theme!! Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 12:01:00 PM
    very lovely write made me smile take care always p.d.

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Enjoyed the freedom feel to this....ahhhhh