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Deep Purple (Part 2)

Underwater thoughts Greenish sounds open the void Purple spots build walls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/19/2009 10:51:00 AM
how far down...for once too far and light growing no closer.........time to write =) inspiration xo Raiin
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:46:00 PM
I feel as if transported ... perhaps I am trekkie here ... but poems are worlds too to be explored. Bravo for the write.
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Date: 6/3/2009 3:39:00 PM
Mind in motion, as the ocean does not mind, find>James
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:03:00 AM
I like the imagery my friend. Keep swimming and sending these pictures back. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful haiku.
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:14:00 PM
nice. I read all three of these and they're all amazing. very vivid of what you see. Great writing my friend.
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