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deep ocean

falling dew
one token
drops of happiness
a foundation
for dreams
Your light i am  
A pale white glow 
shimmering softly 
in slow descent
Melting cold winds 
calming your tide 
reaching the silence 
above the sand 
You shall not die 
when the flame fades 
when i immerse 
in vetdant shades
You shall live on 
eternal youth 
with all its strength 
and hidden truth 
And through the night 
wet salt and mist 
reveal the thirstiness 

of hundred tales 
till the moon shines 
in its crescendo 
dripping its honey 
in still embrace 
Sky sprinkles stardust 
upon your lips 
till new dawn greets you 
with a new kiss 

leaving footprints
in warm sunshine
sailing within
an ocean paradise
chambers reserved
for one so beautiful
only in dreams
holding hands
once kissed
becomes real

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  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Very beautiful imagery in this inspiring poem. I really loved the final verse. It makes us feel like our dreams are not so far away from us, like we can reach out and touch them. Fantastic work, Liam!...Thank you for the nice comments!

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Lovely poem Liam, guess what I cannot read your soup mails, when I click on it, nothing happens, Sorry I wasn't able to read your last soup, I will go ahead and post our last poem, hope it's fine with you, try and send me another soup and I will see if I can open it, xxx

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 6:46:00 AM
    Hi Liam, wonderful romantic write my friend..Well done.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Loved this one Liam....Another gem from the pen....sighs

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:52:00 AM
    I like the flow and the tender romantic tone to this work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 3:52:00 AM
    going to my fvs

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 3:50:00 AM
    falling dew-one token-drops of happiness-a fondation for dreams/These are my favourite verses of all the poem Such a beauty as if inspired by venus blanket of warm light and romance

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/30/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    inspiring beyond teardrops making poetry sounds in comment a musical beauty thank you dearly heartfelt appreciated
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 9/30/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just love the ending verses..pure magic