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falling dew one token drops of happiness a foundation for dreams Your light i am A pale white glow shimmering softly in slow descent Melting cold winds calming your tide reaching the silence above the sand You shall not die when the flame fades when i immerse in vetdant shades You shall live on eternal youth with all its strength and hidden truth And through the night wet salt and mist reveal the thirstiness of hundred tales till the moon shines in its crescendo dripping its honey in still embrace Sky sprinkles stardust upon your lips till new dawn greets you with a new kiss leaving footprints in warm sunshine sailing within an ocean paradise chambers reserved for one so beautiful only in dreams holding hands once kissed becomes real

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Date: 9/30/2013 5:22:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery in this inspiring poem. I really loved the final verse. It makes us feel like our dreams are not so far away from us, like we can reach out and touch them. Fantastic work, Liam!...Thank you for the nice comments!
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:46:00 AM
Hi Liam, wonderful romantic write my friend..Well done.. Ken
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Date: 9/30/2013 5:47:00 AM
Loved this one Liam....Another gem from the pen....sighs
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:52:00 AM
I like the flow and the tender romantic tone to this work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:52:00 AM
going to my fvs
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:50:00 AM
falling dew-one token-drops of happiness-a fondation for dreams/These are my favourite verses of all the poem Such a beauty as if inspired by venus blanket of warm light and romance
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/30/2013 12:04:00 PM
inspiring beyond teardrops making poetry sounds in comment a musical beauty thank you dearly heartfelt appreciated
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/30/2013 11:13:00 AM
I just love the ending verses..pure magic

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