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Death Scene

Pronounced dead, ready to burn Wash in water all ashes gone Left behind memories to ponder and cry Or miss the person who stood by Many a fight for the left behind Leaving the soul that has travelled light Nothing brought anything taken Still the presence was well played The script of the lord the ending too We walk past life just living that through The stage is set, the curtains go up Never shed tears just clap on The show was on and now it’s gone…..sunkan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/17/2010 6:50:00 PM
thanku echo, very happy to see you here my friend..sunkan
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:44:00 PM
Thanku ram happy to see you like these lines here..sunkan
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Date: 12/17/2010 5:57:00 PM
This is a very well written poem. I enjoyed it :) -Echo
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:29:00 AM
Very positive and evotional write full of wisdom you have penned, sundari. I have written a poem on the Indian myth Kanhapatra that took place around Maharashtra. Let me know if you can add some information on the myth after reading.
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