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Death of Today

A movement of air In the night Barely perceptible To the sight A whisper of air The days' final breath For the clock is ticking The days' coming death Last minutes fade Till the day is history Its death soon to come Nevermore shall this day be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2012 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:15:00 PM
this is a very interesting concept, writing just about the death of a day in time. LOVE it and congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/25/2012 2:15:00 PM
Intereresting work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2012 12:29:00 PM
We wile away the time, often without appreciating each day that comes. A nice reminder! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:04:00 AM
Very profound. Congratulations Daniel
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Brian. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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