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Death Has Become Him Again

The first rays of light are seen from his hole. He's climbed his way out and restored his soul. He takes a glance at his skin; it's teeming with scars, And he wonders aloud how he had fallen so far. It matters not now; the Sun, it has risen, He's finally freed from his internal prison. He's bathed in the day, though he is broken. A heart filled with joy; no words need be spoken. But the joy soon recedes, and is replaced by despair. He's clawing for breath in a space with no air. He resides in a hell where all light is expunged. He's fallen again, and into darkness is plunged.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2012 11:47:00 PM
You're getting Lizzie worried about these writes. This is a very descriptive one with some decent rhyming.
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Date: 12/8/2011 6:39:00 AM
Nicely composed piece. Conveys so much. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:51:00 PM
Such sadness here such pain, my heart reaches out to this poem to try and take the darkness away. Lizzie
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:34:00 PM
A rather nicely rhymed set of six couplets, with a somewhat macabrely themed allegory of fall, redemption, and regression. I enjoyed your work.
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