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Dear Son

You're a man,you proved that
droping ladies,it does hurt
no stub of respect for your mat!
Please have a heart
and honour your hut.

How fast you fell in the ditch
and sores over you.they itch
in time it saves nine-the stitch
son,heed what the vicar did preach.

A promising future was there
inside you my son my heir
but your route leads to nowhere.
if you get lost,we won't bear
your mom's heart will have a tear
a tear with no repair.

Wisdom is for the wise
shame will hide you as mice
change and be nice
don't mess twice
you just can't pay the price.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Yes, you have to listen to your wise father "son"! - Have a lovely Sunday. - Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 5:26:00 PM
    Dear fate, a very wise,, poem.. deep.. thank you for sharing your poem, here on the soup. Take care~PD