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Dear Mother Part I

Dear Mother Dear Mother; I knew that it had to be that night. You didn't know yet, but you were already a mother. You didn't know I was there, that for me a new life was beginning. it would bea beautiful expirence knowing that i would grow inside of you and if you would accept me as your son. The first month went well for me.I was so happy, I could hear your heart beat. My little body was taking form. You still didn't know I was there. You would know very soon. It was on the third month, when i finally felt your hand and the caresses you gave me. You made me so happy. You don't know how much I wanted to cry out and tell you, "yes mother - I'm here. I am the fruit of your love. Give me life. You could not hear me. What could I do? Suddenly a thought occurred to me, to let you know I was there. Yes - a little kick. That would be my special language to communicate with you. I did give you a little kick. You felt it, you felt something inside of you was moving. I felt you tremble with emotion. after that day I would always communicate with you in my special language. i could feel it in your voice that you were happy. I was growing more and more everyday. I was a big boy now, compared to the tiny seed I had been in the beginning and to know that you accepted me and took care of me. It was one night dear mother, he still didn't know about me yet. Why didn't you tell him? Then I heard you cry. Why did you cry? Were you not happy that I growing inside of you? I could feel the convulsions of your cries.. I knew and understood that this was this was the beginning of something that was going to end. I felt that you didn't want me, or loved me anymore. What did that evil man tell you that changed you so much?
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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Can't wait to read part two Lucy, intriguing write. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:35:00 PM
    oh my, it's a mystery. I have to go see the ending !!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:35:00 AM
    amazing Lucilla, going to two

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 11:06:00 AM
    Hola de nuevo Lucilla, Another heartfelt and poignant write from the heart...Estoy aprendiendo Espanol...I am not completely fluent yet...You may enjoy my "Autumn Brown" write,, Que le vaya bien, Ken....

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:55:00 AM
    You have a very good passionate heart that can be clearly felt from your beautiful poems. Really it's a very sweet observation, generally rare thinks of it. Lovely done. I am too emotional, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:48:00 PM
    On my way to part two.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:03:00 PM
    ... a new life ... wanted ... or unwanted ..... I will find the answer ...