Dear John

You make me angry,
you make me sad,
you're the worst lover
that I've ever had.
You make me blue,
you make me cry.
I think it's time
we say goodbye.
You just don't try,
you just upset.
I've given you more
than I'll ever get.
You just wont do it...
will you hunny?
Get a job
and earn some money.
Then you wouldn't have to steal,
Get it together...
Time to get real!
Just carry on
being that way...
Nobody will want you,
alone you will stay.
Don't just say it...
Go on, leave.
Coz all you do 
is snarl and seeth.
You've got a problem,
you really do.
I'd see a shrink
if I were you.
I hope you get better,
yes, it's true.
Then start a life
with someone new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/5/2013 3:35:00 PM
great stuff Jenny, great to have fellow brit on PS, I'm north of the border, really good writing, much impressed, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:31:00 PM
Aww, thanks Gordon,....my best friend's a northerner and I have family in Harrogate. I hope you will read more of my poems.
Date: 8/4/2013 5:27:00 AM
This sounds like the "Selfish Bloke" in "Bad B F"...giving him his walking papers here I gather LOL!!! Yep nice ryhme and meter here, absolutely, kick him to the curb! MC
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Date: 8/4/2013 4:50:00 AM
Hmm I sad write, yes I think your right help is needed, excellent rhythm and flow rhyming good, it paints a very sad picture, hope it is not a true story, blessings sueellen
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Date: 8/4/2013 4:44:00 AM
that's true how about me and you? lols just kidding very nice
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