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Dear John

Dear John....... my heart feels like it has turned to ice Spending my days alone and staring at the moon at night I wonder where you are and if your doing alright I wish you were here to bring me back to life I wish you were here like you always used to be During the times I felt alive and finally free wearing that bracelet that had the lock and key before I gave it back and let the love leave I watched the love leave as your heart turned to ice You left me alone and took away the moon's light You never told me where you were or asked if i'm alright Do you wish I was there to bring you back to life? Back to life when there was desire in your eye When your mind could not think to ever say goodbye remember these times when I was by your side? Oh, Dear John please lower your pride Lower your pride and let love melt the ice You don't have to go through this alone, let back in the light tell me where you are and I'll make it alright your wish will come true; we can come back to life .....Dear John

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Date: 11/29/2012 11:52:00 AM
VERY ROMANTIC WRITE MATE THANKYOU FOR COMMENTS ON MINE DONT KNOW IF I SOUP MAUILED YOU OR NOT WELCOME TO SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Nicole Marrier
Date: 11/29/2012 11:54:00 AM
thank you for your welcome.
Date: 11/29/2012 5:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Nicole. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol
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Nicole Marrier
Date: 11/29/2012 11:55:00 AM
Thank you carol and yes this site offers much inspiration.
Date: 11/29/2012 4:12:00 AM
WHoa! THis is lovely Marrier! The way you've done it like writing a letter to a loved one is very effective. The emotions expressed show the evidence of a love that was once vibrant. Well penned!
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Nicole Marrier
Date: 11/29/2012 5:24:00 AM
thank you:)

Book: Shattered Sighs