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Deadly Mistake

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Deadly Mistake

trip and splash
teeth take advantage and sink
flock must flee

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 3:31:00 PM
    A dedly mistake that sings and swings. Dutch Greetings. Elly

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:54:00 PM
    Of course. I think I was pretty slow on this one. But when the penny dropped, I was impressed. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Splendid 3/7/3 HAIKU! Your use of alliterations is duly noted... and applauded!!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Whoa..that was awesome.."gators delite"

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    Date: 10/22/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Exactly what I was getting at kj!! Thanks for the comment. :) ~Laura
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 5:10:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:25:00 AM
    I have to ask what inspired this? Anyway, I thank you for being here, for your comments and for your wisdom.

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 3:48:00 PM
    I got the picture of wolves attacking sheep. Good poem

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 8:55:00 PM
    A true haiku.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Hi Laura, ha just knowing makes me nerves. I am guilty, of making such mistakes. Hate myself sometimes.. anyways, off the haiku subject... enjoyed, seems as if someone really screwed up, ..panic rush... xool...PD

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Fierce and, dare I say, biting. :) Awesome job here!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:18:00 PM
    - Unique, haiku Laura! - Well done ! - @ -(You're so beautiful, love your photo) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)