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Dead Revenge

Do you remember?
No? Let me lend you my mind
You see, you weren't so kind
Now, lets go back in time
So you may remember your crime
Now you see, my blood stains your soul
Your heart is as black as coal
My screams fill your head
While my body remains dead
Why are you crying fool?
OH, is it cause I'm doing the exact same thing to you?
Now tell me, do you remember?

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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:35:00 PM
    Danyel Lara ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:40:00 AM
    Danyel, welcome to P-Soup! Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Give your comments and you will get back. - I like your poem, you write very well. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)