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dead maples

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dead maples

~~ I heard them groaning I heard the chainsaws sawing-- the maples lay dead _______________________ October 16, 2013 Senryu For the contest, Senryu, Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:33:00 PM
    An excellent expression of a sad scene...congrats to you! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:49:00 AM
    beautiful and deep, xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:23:00 PM
    A good portrait of stark reality. Congrats on your HM, Constance! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Love this Constance!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:08:00 PM
    deep poem Broken, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 7:11:00 PM
    So graphic in so few words... Great stuff... Jake

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Heartbreaking to see trees that have lived for years cut down in a minute. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 3:38:00 PM
    good to finally see this one by perusing the winners' list. Congratulations, and I think trees and plants are "sensitive" to sounds and the ways we affect them.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:59:00 PM
    wow, such power in three lines here, my friend - a sure fire winner. Congrats on your wins, by the way : )

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:00:00 PM
    Ps........I do want to thank you so much, Constance, ......your contests always inspire me to write,...and I am so pleased that you found my last poem worthy. Thank you very much!

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Today I heard that chainsaw.....only in my case, it was an oak in the way of "progress". It makes me sad. :(

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the honor of beiing in the winners' list in your contest..I feel for the trees when they are sawed down for whatever reason and the environment around them..Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Wow Constance, such a visual you leave for us to see! I really enjoyed reading this stupendous poem this evening! What a sophisticated piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:00:00 PM