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Daybreak By Design

an eager morning sun is rising though the moon still hangs pale over the water and all things trivial cease to matter when earth and sky are compromising I'll find dawn's beauty by design and find, as well, joy overcome my heart, my soul, while watching from the window of day-night, entwined ___________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/5/2013 11:28:00 PM
Exquisite writing as always! Love the last two lines in the second verse...sounds like a song of praise, Carrie! This goes to my Favs. List! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here Carrie!Please check the theme of her contest.
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Date: 1/4/2013 11:23:00 PM
Sweet one...good to see you back, hope all is well. BG
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