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Day One

Day One, so on and so forth That's about how we met Took him away from another girl Soon learned the word regret! Day Two . . . wasn't any better Not like I thought it'd be That selfish girl came round And took him back from me! Well sister let me tell you That guy belongs to me He's just so immature So now we're on Day Three! Thirty days rolled by Before I think I knew I'd passed another Day One Rolled up in number Two Finally! . . . I woke up Just as the alarm rang I'll be late for 8th grade So up and out I sprang!

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Date: 4/14/2015 10:28:00 AM
Day one. Day two.... i liked this one..
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Date: 7/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
very well done...
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Date: 7/7/2013 11:12:00 AM
Beautiful piece, smells honey. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:27:00 AM
Very cute....:-) congratulations
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Date: 7/6/2013 5:13:00 PM
Judy, a witty and enjoyable read. Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 7/6/2013 2:17:00 PM
amazing
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:35:00 PM
Judy, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:32:00 PM
A nice poem about adolescent puppy love.
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