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Day of brightness

The water looks cold
deep and eerie
what in its depths 
to make  it so  so scary

The weed frongs
wave with the flow
dark and  misguiding
not a good place to go

the  swans float by
head tucked under wing
ducks and geese
doing the same thing

it's been a busy day
many people out in a boat
some you  row yourself
others  you sit and gloat

A little cafe 
with a lovely view
selling home made cakes
coffee and milkshakes too

the clouds pass by
the moon trying to shine
looks like its 10 layers up
but all will  be fine

when daybreak comes
the sun rises and so
A day of brightness
sunshine aglow.

The lake looks inviting
urges  you too
hire a boat
find the real you

so come  on everybody
let's go to the lake
A lovely walk with
an ice to partake

lie on the grass
relax in the sun
let tension pass 
another memory has begun.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:17:00 AM
    Images drip from your words so nicely.. I love how it inserts pictures in my mind as I read through it... Thank you for visiting my blog.. xxx Michael

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael, unfortunately wasn't good enough for the judge. I am pleased you lost yourself in its words ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Well Seren as for visual, it doesn't get much better, as for poetry, it doesn't either.. guess you can guess i just love this,, such an inspiration you are.....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, nice to see you here...Seren
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:48:00 AM
    Hi poppet , a relaxing read and urges us to take time and think xx

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Love this Seren, so talented painting a picture with words. Namaste. Rick

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rick, what does Namaste mean please. ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:32:00 PM
    This is yet another one of your glorious write of yours that you have so eloquently written! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful and inspirational piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell.. Seren