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Day of Brightness

The water looks cold deep and eerie what in its depths  to make  it so  so scary The weed frongs wave with the flow dark and  misguiding not a good place to go the  swans float by head tucked under wing ducks and geese doing the same thing it's been a busy day many people out in a boat some you  row yourself others  you sit and gloat A little cafe  with a lovely view selling home made cakes coffee and milkshakes too the clouds pass by the moon trying to shine looks like its 10 layers up but all will  be fine when daybreak comes the sun rises and so A day of brightness sunshine aglow. The lake looks inviting urges  you too hire a boat find the real you so come  on everybody let's go to the lake A lovely walk with an ice to partake lie on the grass relax in the sun let tension pass  another memory has begun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/23/2013 5:17:00 AM
Images drip from your words so nicely.. I love how it inserts pictures in my mind as I read through it... Thank you for visiting my blog.. xxx Michael
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Michael, unfortunately wasn't good enough for the judge. I am pleased you lost yourself in its words ....Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 10:01:00 AM
Well Seren as for visual, it doesn't get much better, as for poetry, it doesn't either.. guess you can guess i just love this,, such an inspiration you are.....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2013 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Harry, nice to see you here...Seren
Date: 3/21/2013 2:48:00 AM
Hi poppet , a relaxing read and urges us to take time and think xx
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Date: 3/20/2013 6:32:00 PM
This is yet another one of your glorious write of yours that you have so eloquently written! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful and inspirational piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/20/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Russell.. Seren

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