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Day Dreams

i awoke this morning to the sun licking dry any dew that remained from the night, or from dreams that flickered like lost stars in my deepest thoughts. i never surrendered my mind to this water-colored day that sat on a half-painted canvas awaiting for me to dust off the night's glow from my own smiling face. who said dreams are made for night? nights seems too short to trade in for one day, one day to dream, broken thoughts as they weave in and out of my mind, much like the sun did with the clouds, but i too drifted, winded across the horizons and generated almost as much heat as the day itself. night had come again and i watched as the sky exploded into an array of colors around me, wrapping me deeper in my own thoughts as i dreamt of you once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2014 2:47:00 PM
What a blessing! This is such an enjoyable, beautifully written and captivating read. Thank you so much for the share. You are indeed hugely talented
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Date: 10/10/2013 4:30:00 PM
the very last night tied it all up and made it so sweet. As Harry said here, it's magical.
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Date: 11/25/2012 3:33:00 PM
wow, this sure is magical, i'm glad dreams are not just for the night, if poetry like this is produced.. love this....
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Date: 11/25/2012 7:15:00 AM
I daydream all day till its time to night dream... Your poem is so soothing and a mirror of parts of many poets days... Love it.... hugs Michael
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:07:00 PM
what a peaceful poem you penned here. i daydream a lot at times. that is what has kept me sane. Have a great day, Jancarl
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