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Day At the Beach

the waves are crashing the sight is dashing the sea so cold the waves loud and bold all the umbrellas casting shade sand castles being made my feet bare in the sand the sunset is so grand all the sand in my hair flipflops below every chair the breeze washes away every mistake it feels so good with every breath I take and in the dark i see a little shark As i eat an ice cream cone I guess it's time to go home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2014 6:03:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely day.
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Date: 12/11/2011 5:20:00 PM
Sounds like a good description of life at the Jersey Shore in May through September. Decent wording and rhyming.
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